Script for voiceover for Mystery

Script for voiceover:

Bradley Hope – Detective Macs Pain
David Leighton – Chief Constable Creedy


Phone rings

‘Macs, Rogue is in town. I need you to keep an eye on him, but whatever you do don’t engage. ‘

‘Boss, this guy is in town and you’re telling me I can’t engage?! He killed Lawrie boss, a good cop!’

‘Macs, don’t get ahead of your self you don’t stand a chance this guy is Lethal’.

‘I’m gonna get him, Lawrie deserves that at least.’

‘I am your commanding officer and you will do as I instruct, I want you to follow him, I want you to watch him but under no circumstances make contact, do I make myself clear or do I have to get Officer Stooge on the job?...

‘No, no Stooge is half the cop I am’

‘I know, that is why I put you on this assignment, there was no other way’.

‘Boss..’

‘I only gave you this because you’re the only one good enough to even keep up with him. If you engage I will take your badge, your gun and your job Macs.’

‘So be it.’

‘What?’

‘Listen to me, Creedy. I’m gonna follow that bastard, just as you asked. I’m gonna follow him, just like you asked, then I’m gonna do the rest. I’m gonna hunt him down, I’m gonna hurt him, and make him bleed, then I’m gonna make him beg. Then I’m gonna kill him. And there ain’t a god damn thing you can do about it.

‘Macs no! I know you were close to Lawrie but…’

‘Save it chief’

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we added this transcript to be said over our film after we got our audience feedback. Seeing our film on the big screen made us realise that we had to add more to our opening sequence. When we saw the opening sequence on the big screen we realised that it needed more and that it wasn't quiet at its potential because the storyline was ambigous with out it.People thought our camera angles/shots were good but we needed to add something else to get the total "wow" factor.